Yes, it's evocative, with some pleasing poetic imagery. Not being a poet myself I would have tidied up his punctuation and adjusted or questioned some of the pl

Yes, it's evocative, with some pleasing poetic imagery. Not being a poet myself I would have tidied up his punctuation and adjusted or questioned some of the plural/singular nouns ('memes ... are a force which flow?', 'surprisingly brief', 'the world's stage', 'undulating patterns', 'confined space?', 'by the gazillion?'). But poets are more interesting to read than copy editors...