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I respect your comment but you can ignore the left half of any but comment.
by breck 6y ago
I respect your comment but you can ignore the left half of any but comment.
- c7DJTLrn 6y agoSorry, I have a poor style of writing. I'll try to clean it up.
- breck 6y agoNo worries. I agreed with your comment. That rhetorical style I find myself doing a lot, until someone pointed it out to me. They showed me there’s a better way to be constructive. Just jump to the point. Compliments are fine at the end.
- SippinLean 6y agoI never understood this cliché. Half a sentence is invalidated by a conjunction? We can't have two contrasting clauses in a single sentence?
- chipotle_coyote 6y agoWhile I think breck's phrasing is a bit overstated, and sometimes you really do want to have two contrasting clauses in a single sentence, their statement was (I presume intentionally!) self-illustrating: > I respect your comment but you can ignore the left half of any but comment. "I respect your comment, but..." isn't doing any meaningful work in this sentence; it's not contrasting anything, it's just introducing the actual point: "You can ignore the left half of any 'but' comment." You don't really lose anything by taking out the left half.