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Just a meta-comment, but is this blog meant to be stream-of-consciousness? I found the prose very hard to read, and the phrasing to be quite jarring. Possibly t
by Thorentis 6y ago
Just a meta-comment, but is this blog meant to be stream-of-consciousness? I found the prose very hard to read, and the phrasing to be quite jarring. Possibly too many commas or separate phrases?
- MrYellowP 6y ago> I now have a games console at home for the first time in some years, which I bought in response to the ongoing pandemic, and one thing that I have noticed is that using it feels like being offline in a way that playing games on a regular computer never would. I agree with you. The structure of his thoughts could use some improvement.
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- oneeyedpigeon 6y agoObviously take this with a pinch of salt, but it's the first piece of writing I've seen achieve a 'post-graduate' readability rating on Hemingway.
- spwhitton 6y agoSorry to put you through that! I normally go back and edit my blog posts at least a little bit, but I wasn't very happy with this one, so I didn't bother. I didn't expect it to have a readership beyond whoever happened to look at planet.debian.org yesterday.