I agree that the actual information content in this 'pitch' is abysmal. As for the presenters' technique, I'd like to add: - Speak whole sentences, and keep c

I agree that the actual information content in this 'pitch' is abysmal. As for the presenters' technique, I'd like to add: - Speak whole sentences, and keep continuity. - Don't interject 'Errrrr.... So! Ehm, ..." all the time.