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Interesting topic with some clear examples, but then some that completely throw off the track of the article, without clear connections to the examples the arti
by techbio 6y ago
Interesting topic with some clear examples, but then some that completely throw off the track of the article, without clear connections to the examples the article begins with or starts going toward.
> So we can just graph GAD-7 scores and then we…
>…in fact, this doesn’t work. Let’s look at the flu graph above again.
Seems unfinished, in need of reviewing or an editor, and makes steps towards an explanation that remains incomplete.
- Sniffnoy 6y agoThat part isn't unfinished; it's a rhetorical device. The first ellipsis there represents the speaker realizes that the approach he's about to propose can't be made to work. If you like, imagine it said > So we can just graph GAD-7 scores and then we, uh... >...in fact, this approach doesn’t work. Let’s look at the flu graph above again.
- techbio 6y agoRecognizing the rhetorical device, I still would have liked to see more linkages between the early part of the article and the later sections that address the title topic, especially in the form of charts intelligible to a layperson.