I had to read this a few times to understand what your product is, maybe because I wanted to stop reading halfway through the first sentence. Most people scan a

I had to read this a few times to understand what your product is, maybe because I wanted to stop reading halfway through the first sentence. Most people scan and if the first scan is too hard they move on. I think the first sentence should have shorter, simpler words. Maybe: “Build an online community in two clicks with DiscoFlip. Easier to configure and monetize than Reddit or Facebook Groups.”