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I got more out of this comment than the original website. You should just say this in the first paragraph even before you refer to 'the paper'.
by akkartik 16y ago
I got more out of this comment than the original website. You should just say this in the first paragraph even before you refer to 'the paper'.
- sukhbir 16y agoThe 'Idea' page mentions this clearly. The third line in fact.
- akkartik 16y agoBetween a reader and that 'third line' lie 5 lines, a click, and 8 more lines. Put the punchline first, it'll keep the reader reading longer. It's a good idea; I just want more people to get it before they hit the back button.
- sukhbir 16y agoRight, thanks for the feedback. I have updated it to better reflect the idea.
- akkartik 16y agoYeah, that works great.