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This is a good first effort, but I would do some retooling if I were you. It's going to take more time but you really need to find a way to make the concepts, m
by scpedicini 6y ago
This is a good first effort, but I would do some retooling if I were you. It's going to take more time but you really need to find a way to make the concepts, mechanics and descriptions more interrelated.
For example, you might have a card called List Comprehension, which allows you to apply some effect X over all creatures of type Y.
Additionally it would be worth your time to hire a native English proofreader. There are several grammatical errors that I noticed, and some of the sentences are awkwardly constructed. Feel free to reach out to me if you'd like assistance in that regard.
- tomaszs 6y agoThanks for the feedback and your offer. English language is not my native one, that is why decks will be proofread by a professional english educator and a native speaker before being shipped. The same goes for the product page that is waiting for the final check.
- matthewfcarlson 6y agoYou have something here. Python the card game. You have a list of monsters, create tuples in your list (which is a group of monsters that can be thought of as one object).
- tomaszs 6y agoJust an update: Python deck is now double checked by a native English proofreader