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Yes, the article is definitely in need of an editor's touch. The sentence "She placed a can on one of the Observatory’s telescopes, which had been forgotten ab
by unsignedchar 6y ago
Yes, the article is definitely in need of an editor's touch.
The sentence "She placed a can on one of the Observatory’s telescopes, which had been forgotten about until September this year ..." makes it sound like it was the telescope that had been forgotten.