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I’m just glad she’s alive, the article made me think she was no longer alive.
by bigmattystyles 6y ago
I’m just glad she’s alive, the article made me think she was no longer alive.
- piratejon 6y agoReading the last paragraph, I did not come away with the same impression you did: "Regina is now a photography technician at Barnet and Southgate College."
- notimetorelax 6y agoI think OP meant the past tense they used when talking about Regina. The last paragraph did clear the confusion.
- globular-toast 6y agoAnd the fact that it was "discovered" which makes it sound like it was found in a dead person's lab or something. The article really gives the impression that she's dead, which is odd if that's not what is intended.
- unsignedchar 6y agoYes, the article is definitely in need of an editor's touch. The sentence "She placed a can on one of the Observatory’s telescopes, which had been forgotten about until September this year ..." makes it sound like it was the telescope that had been forgotten.