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It’s incredibly scattered. Like you just dumped whatever was on your mind and clicked publish and walked away.
by fourstar 6y ago
It’s incredibly scattered. Like you just dumped whatever was on your mind and clicked publish and walked away.
- mtlynch 6y agoThanks for the feedback. I did spend several hours writing and editing it over a couple weeks, but I understand it might not feel cohesive. The challenge was that there were a lot of details to cover to explain the background. The email exchanges were a bit convoluted because they involved a lot of backreferences to previous events or other screenshots. I wanted to tell the story in an interesting way while presenting the raw evidence instead of just summarizing everything and asking the reader to assume I'm being fair, but I can see how all the screenshots and blockquotes might have made it feel cluttered.
- fourstar 6y agoCheers. Wasn’t trying to be a prick about it on purpose. I’m brutally direct.
- bitcharmer 6y agoLooks like you've read a different article then. This write up is very well structured and reads very easily.