You have line breaks and weird spacing all throughout the email - at least judging by the .png that you posted. It looks like you have copy-pasted the text fro

You have line breaks and weird spacing all throughout the email - at least judging by the .png that you posted. It looks like you have copy-pasted the text from somewhere. Also, your grammar sucks - if your English isn't that good, at least have somebody proofread your email - you are applying for a job where English is the language that is to be used, and advertising that you don't speak English very well is hardly going to help you land a job...