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great article. watch your capitalization. but this is a pretty boring topic, discussed innumerable times. your article doesn't shed any new light on the subjec
by jiveturkey 6y ago
great article. watch your capitalization.
but this is a pretty boring topic, discussed innumerable times. your article doesn't shed any new light on the subject.
as well, the gratuitous use of 'normies' (i think the word is fine, but many don't) stands out because the article isn't actually written for normies. at all.
that said, you have some good writing skills so keep at it. for your next topic do something actually interesting.
- iHegazy 6y agoThanks for your feedback, I have fixed some of the addressed punctuation mistakes and will try to avoid them completely in my next blog. It's true that my blog doesn't add anything since this topic is pretty popular, but I kinda wanted to just spit it out since I haven't done anything productive for some time now and it makes me more comfortable with blogging in general which I'm trying to get better at! Cheers!