This is really only going to make your writing "bold and clear" if you prefer one specific style of writing, something perhaps akin to how Hemingway wrote. I p

This is really only going to make your writing "bold and clear" if you prefer one specific style of writing, something perhaps akin to how Hemingway wrote. I pasted in the first line of 100 Years of Solitude by Garcia Marquez, considered to be one of the greatest opening lines of 20th century literature, and was warned for its length and complexity. Writing which has aesthetic appeal cannot be boiled down to a heuristic which prizes one element (simplicity) over all others. You can develop interesting writing, and even beautiful writing that way. You can notice bad habits and avoid them. But writing is not so simple as to have one expressive path which creates "boldness" and "clarity."