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I've never really given microcopy thought... I probably need to look into that. I'm actually really struggling with copy and messaging right now on https://qvau
by lanecwagner 6y ago
I've never really given microcopy thought... I probably need to look into that. I'm actually really struggling with copy and messaging right now on https://qvault.io https://qvault.io. If anyone on here takes a peek at the landing page I would love to hear feedback!
- rsweeney21 6y agoI just finished re-writing all the copy for www.facet.net, so copy writing is fresh on my mind. Here's some feedback: - It wasn't clear to me what your company does after reading your home page. - When I saw the "Courses" section it clicked. But I only read that far because you asked for feedback. - You should lead with what you do or what benefit the customer will receive. - For example, the main title on your home page should be something like "Learn computer science by playing games" or "Fun, self-guided computer science courses" I would highly recommend https://copyhackers.com/ https://copyhackers.com/.