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Too much text. Distil the value proposition of your service into a single sentence or two and put it in a nice big font so that I can get the gist in a couple
by grovulent 15y ago
Too much text. Distil the value proposition of your service into a single sentence or two and put it in a nice big font so that I can get the gist in a couple of seconds.
The extent to which you already do this isn't really effective:
"Your personalized view of the programming world"...
doesn't mean anything to me. Plus you've used a relatively soft colour to this header - which doesn't really attract the eye all that much.
If the value proposition at a first glance seems interesting to me - then I'll expend the effort in reading more text.
my two cents...
- pankratiev 15y agoThank you for the feedback! I see my mistake with texts, I definitely should rework them. > Your personalized view of the programming world I wanted to point on a personalized feed, but didn't tell anything about that it's a community site/aggregator of programming stuff. Definitely need another sentence. Thank you again!