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Sure. I'll help as my company does cold email as a service. Greeting SNIP Relevance CTA Hey Bold, Saw your HN question about an example of an "ice cold po
by goatherders 6y ago
Sure. I'll help as my company does cold email as a service.
Greeting
SNIP
Relevance
CTA
Hey Bold,
Saw your HN question about an example of an "ice cold polar bear kind of email."
I write emails like this all day for companies like Boldslogan. Would be happy to walk your through it in 10 or 12 minutes.
Zoom on Tuesday or Wed?
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- radihuq 6y agoNice! You got me to check out your website :)
- sk5t 6y agoFWIW this sort of email triggers my immediate shutdown reactions in several ways: use of "Hey" greeting from some unknown non-friend, general (albeit here not total) avoidance of first-person pronouns[1], phony-baloney specificity in time and duration for an initial meeting. [1] "Saw your email," "Would love to hear more"--no, avoiding "I" does not make the writer appear stronger.
- goatherders 6y agoIt doesn't work all the time, but it works well enough.