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“Apple and Google’s parent company, Alphabet, worth more than $3 trillion combined, do compete on plenty of fronts, like smartphones, digital maps and laptops.”
by jtsiskin 6y ago
“Apple and Google’s parent company, Alphabet, worth more than $3 trillion combined, do compete on plenty of fronts, like smartphones, digital maps and laptops.”
This line makes it sound like Apple and Google have the same parent company. Should it read “Apple, and Google’s...”
- dragonwriter 6y agoWhat is written is correct, and your additional punctuation doesn't improve it, but it uses poorly chosen wording. It would be better to just use the simple names as the main items in the list, and say “Apple and Alphabet, Google’s parent company, [...]”