Thanks for the explanation! There's a risk, when attempting to condense prose, that goes like this: you go through several iterations, replacing phrases with s

Thanks for the explanation! There's a risk, when attempting to condense prose, that goes like this: you go through several iterations, replacing phrases with shorter ones and rearranging them, ending up with something that looks good to you, but only because you have been through the process and know how you intend it to be read. For this reason, it is a good idea to have someone else read tour 'final' draft, and to periodically put aside your work for a while and do something else. I do not suppose these are options for people writing headlines, and neither is punctuation (here, a comma after 'company' would have helped.) This can happen when implementing an algorithm as well, and when it does, comments can be useful.