Feedback * as an essay ostensibly designed to persuade others that there is a problem and you want to help, it's not particularly well organized in thought or

Feedback * as an essay ostensibly designed to persuade others that there is a problem and you want to help, it's not particularly well organized in thought or structure. You should look at Joseph Campbell's Hero's Journey structure, I think it aligns with your personal journey really well. My outline would be: * alas! (ordinary world) - many small towns are trapped in a vicious cycle where they don't have economic development help because they're too small, which makes them smaller still .. * but! (Call to adventure) - imagine a world where ... (every small town had access to econ dev pros) * here I am! (Mentor) - what makds me qualified to help, how I would help them * how I envision it would work (special world) - who are my allies, whats the reward, what obstacles we'd need to overcome .. * only if (call to action) - how you, the reader, can help me.