The first thing that stands out to me is that the errors in punctuation (conveniently called out with "(sic)") are similar between both authors. For example, u

The first thing that stands out to me is that the errors in punctuation (conveniently called out with "(sic)") are similar between both authors. For example, using a comma where one would normally end a sentence and omitting apostrophes in contractions and genitive constructions.