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Yes, the site is what I looked at. "Scale your business operations" doesn't tell me anything. Nor does any of the other verbiage in your hero area. The next th
by ccleve 6y ago
Yes, the site is what I looked at. "Scale your business operations" doesn't tell me anything. Nor does any of the other verbiage in your hero area.
The next thing I see is "What is your professional role?" Uh, who cares? Just tell me what your product is. I'm not interested in vague benefits.
- brainless 6y agoThanks, yes the hero needs cleaning. I haven't been focusing on the product site for some time. I'm also going to clean the personas. People usually like that, so I'll have to ask more.