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I've always liked his plays more than the short stories and I haven't read them in English. Maybe his plays are just better?
by petre 6y ago
I've always liked his plays more than the short stories and I haven't read them in English. Maybe his plays are just better?
- pvg 6y agoI don't mean the reason is one aspect of his work is 'better' than the other, just that the difficulty translating his short stories makes them much less accessible to English readers than the plays. I think the reverse is the case for Russian - Жалобная книга (The Complaints Book) is part of Russian idiom, the famous play Чайка (The Seagull) is not. Chekhov just occupies a different part of the English-speaking cultural taxonomy. A (maybe more than a little over the top) way to put it is, it's like if in Russia, Newton was primarily known as a great theologian and alchemist.
- billfruit 6y agoMay be like Victor Hugo is known to English readers as a novelist, while I have heard that French regard him more for his poetry.
- petre 6y agoStrugatski brothers' Monday Begins on Saturday is aslo a difficult translation from Russian. I really love Russian literature, especially modern writers like Vladimir Sorokin, it's so different.
- pvg 6y agoThere's a lot more runway, in a novel, to establish style and voice - both for the authors and for the translators. Monday Begins on Saturday begins: "Я приближался к месту моего назначения. Вокруг меня, прижимаясь к самой дороге, зеленел лес, изредка уступая место полянам, поросшим желтой осокою." Pretty much ez-mode compared to this opener, in the Gooseberries (Крыжовник) someone brought up upthread: "Еще с раннего утра всё небо обложили дождевые тучи; было тихо, не жарко и скучно, как бывает в серые пасмурные дни, когда над полем давно уже нависли тучи, ждешь дождя, а его нет." Two different translators' takes: "The whole sky had been overcast with rain-clouds from early morning; it was a still day, not hot, but heavy, as it is in grey dull weather when the clouds have been hanging over the country for a long while, when one expects rain and it does not come." and "From early morning the sky had been overcast with clouds; the day was still, cool, and wearisome, as usual on grey, dull days when the clouds hang low over the fields and it looks like rain, which never comes." The struggle is real!
- aasasd 6y agoThe ‘Gooseberries’ excerpt sounds close to ‘stream-of-consciousness’ with the attempts to describe the inner mood—and indeed I can't think of anyone speaking or writing in English in the manner of that passage, except Nabokov. As a translator, you'd basically have to imagine maybe John Malkovich narrating your book, and then whack at the words until they sound natural coming from him.
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- eapriv 6y agoI would argue that Strugatski brothers’ first sentence is harder to translate, because it’s a direct quote from Pushkin.
- pvg 6y agoThe allusion one can stick in footnote. Sticking Checkhov's style in a footnote is harder than putting Baby in a corner.