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I think there are two kinds of long sentences. One just keeps adding detail. It's essentially a list. Breaking it up into multiple sentences would require a lo
by fauigerzigerk 6y ago
I think there are two kinds of long sentences.
One just keeps adding detail. It's essentially a list. Breaking it up into multiple sentences would require a lot of unnecessary conjunctions as you say.
The other kind of long sentence forces you to keep a lot in your head until the meaning is finally resolved at the very end. That's the kind of sentence that should be broken up because it creates unnecessary mental burden.
- rimliu 6y agoIt may also create necessary mental burden. I think too much has been considered "unnecessary mental burden" recently, including education.
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