Explain how the grammar is sound? And I mean that seriously because I want to be well written. It seems like it should be: "Or would you?" - so that what foll

Explain how the grammar is sound? And I mean that seriously because I want to be well written. It seems like it should be: "Or would you?" - so that what follows 'or' is the converse of what was said. Or "Wouldn't you?" - without the 'or' to denote skepticism. And while we're on it, nix the first 'a' in "wearing a jeans and a t-shirt..." Please understand that this isn't said out of pedantry, but out of love for this essay. We should all be taught to understand the implications of what a place says to us, on us. It should be part of any formal education. Quibbling over grammar in our casual posts is lame, but this essay deserves to be in a book one day, printed and in wide circulation, so please understand my intention.