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I read the first 100 pages of the first book and then literally threw it into a fire. I believe the "Nope" sentence was something akin to "{character} thought
by ethbro 6y ago
I read the first 100 pages of the first book and then literally threw it into a fire.
I believe the "Nope" sentence was something akin to "{character} thought that {thing} because {thing}."
Jesus Christ. Would it kill you a little to show instead of tell?
(And lest people believe I'm not a fan of some good * opera, I'm not ashamed to admit I've read my fair share of BattleTech, Barsoom, and even Lost Fleet, among less highbrow works)
- unclesaamm 6y agoYou literally threw it into a fire?
- ethbro 6y agoI stand by my decision. The world is a better place.
- michaelt 6y agoEthbro thought that the book was not good because of the writing.
- ethbro 6y agoYou laugh, but that's exactly how jarring it was. It sticks in my memory because I remember being somewhat annoyed at the writing level hitherto, reading through that sentence, realizing what I'd just read a few sentences later, going back to double-check, then chucking the book. And don't get me wrong, I've got space for some crappy writing in my sci-fi (looking at you, Foundation).