Thanks for putting this up for feedback. I read with some interest. For me the biggest piece that was missing was evidence that the ideas work. The content sou

Thanks for putting this up for feedback. I read with some interest. For me the biggest piece that was missing was evidence that the ideas work. The content sounds aspirational “wouldn’t it be nice if” and not grounded in lived experience. You should definitely put some information in your intro about who you are and where you’ve seen these ideas work, and from what viewpoint you are coming from. This would add more credibility. For example, it is not self evident to me that async is inherently better for decision making or assigning tasks. It is better for decision communicating and task tracking, but either in chat or a voice call it is so much faster to communicate the nuances of a complicated assignment or ask. You also may want the persons input on the issue at hand. You also may need a _quick_ decision.