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I also noticed this. The weird stilted language and repeated (yet mildly disjointed) thoughts is reminiscent of an algorithm stringing sentences together.
by julianlam 6y ago
I also noticed this. The weird stilted language and repeated (yet mildly disjointed) thoughts is reminiscent of an algorithm stringing sentences together.
- fit2rule 6y agoMaybe its just a non-native English speaker, whose native language promotes the formation of this kind of sentence structure. To me, it reads a little like Hebrew run through a google translate ..
- thrill 6y agoThe author supposedly has a BS, MA and PhD from Yale. I think it's likely just poor editing, whether by himself or from a lack of appreciation of proper editors in publications.