Still has some repetition and simplicity issues - article reads like it's written for an "eighth grade" reading level, and tends to repeat major points multiple

Still has some repetition and simplicity issues - article reads like it's written for an "eighth grade" reading level, and tends to repeat major points multiple times per line. There's also a lot less pronoun use than I'd expect in free-written text. These signs might prove useful in the months to come.