It has a nice design. I would suggest two things. One, a way to pause the tour. I couldn't find it. Two, a case study, showing how somebody used your product.

It has a nice design. I would suggest two things. One, a way to pause the tour. I couldn't find it. Two, a case study, showing how somebody used your product. Testimonials are also great, and its another way to connect to a potential customer. Believe it or not, some still are given work computers without speakers, so the video tour is useless. And some people just like reading things instead. I do at least, its usually faster and I can tell quicker if I like the idea, without waiting for the tour to move along. A more in-depth how-it-works page would appeal to me more than a video tour. Plus it gives you a chance to sell your services in the way you explain how it works. EDIT: Here's someone else launching today: http://www.balsamiq.com/products/mockups http://www.balsamiq.com/products/mockups. They have a little more explanation, and a testimonial blurb on the front page. I think it works well.