I agree. I have rethought many parts of the application, including the video. Since my submission, I have developed and narrowed my idea quite a bit. My answ

I agree. I have rethought many parts of the application, including the video. Since my submission, I have developed and narrowed my idea quite a bit. My answers most likely would have been more concise had I known what I do now. But hey, hindsight is 20/20 and you express the best you can at the time.