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Yes. I was aware of my characterization and the word peackocking (to make a vainglorious display; strut like a peacock) was used before it was co-opted by PUA c

by memexy 6y ago

Yes. I was aware of my characterization and the word peackocking (to make a vainglorious display; strut like a peacock) was used before it was co-opted by PUA community (https://www.dictionary.com/browse/peacocking https://www.dictionary.com/browse/peacocking). Let's rewrite that paragraph and use fewer emotionally charged words. -- As a younger person I thought transgenderism was about seeking attention. But being trained in the liberal arts I decided to question this assumption and not act antagonistically towards them because of my personal interpretation of their situation. As I got older I realized my initial assumption about attention seeking was incorrect and I took responsibility for and corrected my beliefs. I guess it could have turned out differently if I hadn't been trained in the liberal arts. So I'm glad my training included keeping an open mind and accepting people different from me and with different life circumstances. -- Same exact content, none of the emotional baggage and vainglory. Notice all the words I took out because I knew they would elicit negative reactions in the reader: stupid, dumb, mistake, very very angry, upset, homophobic. He repeated those words enough times that a perceptive reader would have picked up on the subtext of him trying to distance himself from those negatively valenced words. He's not trying to educate the reader, he's trying to put distance between himself and certain associations. That's why it's not good writing. It's about him, it's not about the reader. And in his attempt to "peacock" he's putting associations into the reader's mind that are detrimental to the reader's thought processes all the while elevating himself as a paragon of goodness. As the term "peacock" suggests, his writing is vainglorious.

mst 6y ago
That rewrite completely loses the point though. The point is not "accepting people different than me", it's "having suitable principles to still fight in favour of people I might otherwise rightly or wrongly dislike". You completely removed the part where he not only didn't act antagonistically towards them but actively opposed other people doing so as well. And that part was the single most important part, and the principle he was arguing in favour of. If you think your rewrite was the same exact content, then I'm afraid I don't think you understood what he was saying at all.
- memexy 6y ago
  > If you think your rewrite was the same exact content, then I'm afraid I don't think you understood what he was saying at all. Bingo! He's obviously not a very good writer. I don't need to argue for freedom of speech and equal rights and justice for all because in my world those are givens. I don't need to justify to myself or others why those truths are self evident. Nor do I need to recount a story about being young and stupid. Everyone used to be young and stupid, that's also a given. There is no need to write it on a blog and show how you're so much better than what you used to be. Let your actions show how you are better. I don't need to be told when I can infer directly from someone's actions whether they're good or not. Words are deceptive, actions are truthful. I don't put words like "very stupid", "angry", "I'm afraid", "fearful", etc. in my writing because I don't identify with those things and I don't want anyone reading my words to identify with them either. If I intend to say something then I say it without flowery language about my youth or emotionally charged words because I reserve those words for private conversations with people that I trust.
  - mst 6y ago
    > I don't need to argue for freedom of speech and equal rights and justice for all because in my world those are givens. The article was about somebody who was arguing that using falsified numbers about rape statistics was not only acceptable feminism but was actually a good thing and that anybody who disagreed with that deserved to be destroyed. Speaking as somebody who believes that the truth is quite sufficient justification for feminism to win, and that lying serves only to hand our enemies means to attack us, I believe that sadly we live in a world where that argument does need to be made. I would prefer to live in a word where these arguments don't need to be made. I would prefer to live in a world where those truths are self evident. But we don't yet, as both Adria Richards and David Shor have found out to their detriment. So making the argument that we should continues to be valuable.
    - memexy 6y ago
      Then there are better ways to make those arguments. Recounting stories about being "young and stupid" is not one of those ways.

by memexy 6y ago

mst 6y ago

That rewrite completely loses the point though. The point is not "accepting people different than me", it's "having suitable principles to still fight in favour of people I might otherwise rightly or wrongly dislike". You completely removed the part where he not only didn't act antagonistically towards them but actively opposed other people doing so as well. And that part was the single most important part, and the principle he was arguing in favour of. If you think your rewrite was the same exact content, then I'm afraid I don't think you understood what he was saying at all.

memexy 6y ago
> If you think your rewrite was the same exact content, then I'm afraid I don't think you understood what he was saying at all. Bingo! He's obviously not a very good writer. I don't need to argue for freedom of speech and equal rights and justice for all because in my world those are givens. I don't need to justify to myself or others why those truths are self evident. Nor do I need to recount a story about being young and stupid. Everyone used to be young and stupid, that's also a given. There is no need to write it on a blog and show how you're so much better than what you used to be. Let your actions show how you are better. I don't need to be told when I can infer directly from someone's actions whether they're good or not. Words are deceptive, actions are truthful. I don't put words like "very stupid", "angry", "I'm afraid", "fearful", etc. in my writing because I don't identify with those things and I don't want anyone reading my words to identify with them either. If I intend to say something then I say it without flowery language about my youth or emotionally charged words because I reserve those words for private conversations with people that I trust.
- mst 6y ago
  > I don't need to argue for freedom of speech and equal rights and justice for all because in my world those are givens. The article was about somebody who was arguing that using falsified numbers about rape statistics was not only acceptable feminism but was actually a good thing and that anybody who disagreed with that deserved to be destroyed. Speaking as somebody who believes that the truth is quite sufficient justification for feminism to win, and that lying serves only to hand our enemies means to attack us, I believe that sadly we live in a world where that argument does need to be made. I would prefer to live in a word where these arguments don't need to be made. I would prefer to live in a world where those truths are self evident. But we don't yet, as both Adria Richards and David Shor have found out to their detriment. So making the argument that we should continues to be valuable.
  - memexy 6y ago
    Then there are better ways to make those arguments. Recounting stories about being "young and stupid" is not one of those ways.