Perhaps a call to action would be better communication then, rather than your clumsy attempt to raise awareness. You came across as condescending and critical.

Perhaps a call to action would be better communication then, rather than your clumsy attempt to raise awareness. You came across as condescending and critical. So well done you in your volunteer work, but perhaps work on your communication style if you were actually looking to promote donating to the cause instead of criticising someone else's achievement.