(Note: I haven't read the article yet; I'm just commenting on general writing practices) It's the responsibility of the person trying to gather and present dis

(Note: I haven't read the article yet; I'm just commenting on general writing practices) It's the responsibility of the person trying to gather and present disparate ideas to synthesize them into a coherent conclusion. This is often hard work, and failing to do so diminishes the effectiveness of the rest of the piece.