tangential, but it seems that, in an effort to be pithy, your comment elides way too many independent clauses, and covers way too much ground across the sentenc

tangential, but it seems that, in an effort to be pithy, your comment elides way too many independent clauses, and covers way too much ground across the sentences written. it's like trying to cross a canyon on dust, rather than a bridge. concision relies on omitting unnecessary words, not whole phrases and sentences. i'd be hard-pressed to restate anything said here with any level of confidence.