A few things: - You can probably just call it essay consistently instead of using "book" so many times. It's only 20 times longer than your blogpost. - You as

A few things: - You can probably just call it essay consistently instead of using "book" so many times. It's only 20 times longer than your blogpost. - You ask for some kindness sharing your posts in your blog, so you could have started sharing a link to the manifesto itself [0]. - Not a big deal, but I find the weird use of links in your blog too weird in many cases. - What you wrote after "Why review a book from the hand of a notorious terrorist who killed three and maimed dozens of people?" is good context, but I believe that especially while reviewing Kaczynski you should have addressed the real point first: because the guy had interesting things to say. [0] http://editions-hache.com/essais/pdf/kaczynski2.pdf http://editions-hache.com/essais/pdf/kaczynski2.pdf