You need a copywriter my friend. What the site does isn't very clear from first reading it; only after parsing what WE ALL was supposed to reference. You don't

You need a copywriter my friend. What the site does isn't very clear from first reading it; only after parsing what WE ALL was supposed to reference. You don't want so many long obtuse words to describe what it is. Say it plainly in and in as few words as possible. Less text == better. The wedding must be after July 1st 2011 bit is a little unnecessary and gives off bad vibes; just say you're launching in July and start collecting emails like a mofo now. I should be staring at a small input form that is begging to convert me and all the other smart-phone touting friends and relatives of mine I'll share this with soon. I get that you have a Google Form/Spreadsheets via the golden button, but the deeper the target, the higher the attrition rate from first time visitors who don't bother to wait along, especially after getting confused by all the text on the sidebar and top. With your idea executed well, you should have a nice MVP rolling along soon. Keep hustling and the initiative.