Feedback purely on the résumé. I noticed at least the following upon a quick look: * Several run-on sentences with too many "and"s; otherwise wordy as well--to

Feedback purely on the résumé. I noticed at least the following upon a quick look: * Several run-on sentences with too many "and"s; otherwise wordy as well--too wordy; too many buzzwords; you use the word "sector" too much * Say "technology" rather than "tech" * It's "MacBook Pro" and "OS X" (upper-case B and space between S and X) * You dabble _in_ something * "I also hope it showcases it might lead": I think you mean "what might lead" * "one half of a team of two" (sounds redundant) * "Ryan B's nifty generators": apostrophe * I would punctuate "etc", but it's acceptable usage to omit the "." Trim and tighten it, a lot.