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The unidirectional nature of > When you contact Apple or its affiliated companies carries different implications than the potential bidirectionality of > any
by zimpenfish 6y ago
The unidirectional nature of
> When you contact Apple or its affiliated companies
carries different implications than the potential bidirectionality of
> anytime you are in contact with Apple or an Apple affiliated company
because the latter explicitly includes "when Apple contacts you".
"We may ask you questions about yourself" also implies a much wider range of latitude in the question topics than "provide your personal information".
The splitting of the "can combine your answers" and the "provide and improve" also makes me twitchy but I can't quite put my finger on why but it feels loophole-y.
(IMHO, obvs.!)
- zucker42 6y agoEh, all those could be remedied with relatively small changes, and the commenter's point is clear regardless.
- tathougies 6y agoSure but 10 small changes is the same as one large change.
- btilly 6y agoYou are right, and I am unhappy with several other points of the quick redraft that I did. However my point remains. The complexity of the language was not required by what was actually said.