Practice and feedback. Find someone whose writing style you admire and ask them to suggest edits to your drafts. Try to understand why they suggested those edit

Practice and feedback. Find someone whose writing style you admire and ask them to suggest edits to your drafts. Try to understand why they suggested those edits. Ask about any edits you don’t understand. Write more. Get more edits. Wash rinse repeat until the suggestions for major changes become rare.