He started his post with a clarifying question and said he wasn't sure if he was interpreting things correctly. So from what I can read, he's already done what

He started his post with a clarifying question and said he wasn't sure if he was interpreting things correctly. So from what I can read, he's already done what you're suggesting he do. Or was the issue that it wasn't asked in sufficiently conversational prose, which is the primary difference I can see between what he wrote and what you suggest?