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“Invariably” is an uncommon word to be honest. Also “nature” in this context is uncommon as well. Kind of archaic. It’s pompous because it uses a whole bunch of
by rubatuga 6y ago
“Invariably” is an uncommon word to be honest. Also “nature” in this context is uncommon as well. Kind of archaic. It’s pompous because it uses a whole bunch of words to say nothing. Use of the active voice instead of passive voice would have helped as well. Add in unnecessary words such as ”ergo”, a frilly web font, and people assume the author just wants to show off.
- cfqycwz 6y agoYeah--compare an alternate phrasing here, like "I watch and give a lot of presentations at work."
- ojilles 6y agoThanks! https://github.com/ojilles/jilles.net/commit/fe6010fb208905eac1e0656e18bf8b8c7945566b https://github.com/ojilles/jilles.net/commit/fe6010fb208905e... (I do hope I can clear the Google Translate bar of quality. Should have edited before publishing! And taken more of my own advice.)