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+1 on this, paragraphs are meant to group ideas. The way they’re used here, there might as well be just a wall of text with no paragraph delineations at all.

• ken 6y ago
  Not every new line must have the same meaning. Do you also look down on James Joyce, T.S. Eliot, Ezra Pound?
  • dhosek 6y ago
    This wasn't poetry.