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The tiny paragraphs are really jarring to read.
by brandly 6y ago
The tiny paragraphs are really jarring to read.
- 0d311 6y ago+1 on this, paragraphs are meant to group ideas. The way they’re used here, there might as well be just a wall of text with no paragraph delineations at all.
- esperent 6y agoThese are not paragraphs. They are lonely disjointed sentences. Floating freely. In a sea of whitespace.
- yepthatsreality 6y agoIt’s a draft for the blog post the author never wrote.