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Great points. Updated the site based on your feedback!
by nikodunk 6y ago
Great points. Updated the site based on your feedback!
- netcan 6y agoGood Luck. Keep chopping! Copywriting isn't that hard, but you should treat it as crafting or artsing. Chunk & edit at different size-levels. Sentences. Words. Paragraphs. Do all of them do a job? Are they doing it well? Being concise is more important in copywriting than in code. "Our new off-grid renewable energy micro-grid system is here! We tried to build the best system we possibly could at the lowest possible price." Too many adjectives! What's the predicate? Our new | off-grid | renewable | energy | micro-grid | system is here :)