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> Which hopefully was another motivation to cut it back. As an aside, it matters a great deal in which ordering you place your benefits. Which advantage you 'l
by lamby 6y ago
> Which hopefully was another motivation to cut it back.
As an aside, it matters a great deal in which ordering you place your benefits. Which advantage you 'lead' with can make a great deal of difference between an effective and ineffective pitch, even if all you have done is swap them around in a sentence.
Compare Oatly's [vegan] oat milk which basically uses "Better at frothing than regular milk... and it saves the environment" vs "This milk saves the environment... and it is better at frothing than regular milk." These will read the same to you in the medium of Hacker News but they are markedly different in efficacy.