"[Living in] a one-bedroom rental in South San Francisco, a short commute from Facebook Inc.’s offices in Menlo Park" -- might want to edit the "short" part. I

"[Living in] a one-bedroom rental in South San Francisco, a short commute from Facebook Inc.’s offices in Menlo Park" -- might want to edit the "short" part. I think that's at least a 1-hour commute, EACH way :)