The pictures of a notebook show some creativity, but in the end I think it hurts you more than it helps you. There were some parts I couldn't read well, and wri

The pictures of a notebook show some creativity, but in the end I think it hurts you more than it helps you. There were some parts I couldn't read well, and writing words on scraps of paper really didn't convey too much about your product (I kept thinking, "what does scraps of paper have to do with meeting people?". Also, by writing down the text, you invite "reading off a PowerPoint syndrome"--show me the story, not the text. Just my two cents.