I mean this in the sincerest and well intentioned way possible — you need to work on your language skills. Your writing is currently working against you; even t

I mean this in the sincerest and well intentioned way possible — you need to work on your language skills. Your writing is currently working against you; even though all of your points are valid, the way they're delivered makes it hard to get through them. I'm a non-native speaker myself so I know that it can be a struggle. However, I think it's a necessary investment if you want to work in the space you've chosen. Stack Exchange has a good site dedicated to improving English [1] as one possible entry point. [1] https://english.stackexchange.com/ https://english.stackexchange.com/