Yes, to be honest at this stage I'm not looking for feedback from people who won't invest a bit more time in it than you have as I'm sharing a lot of ideas in l

Yes, to be honest at this stage I'm not looking for feedback from people who won't invest a bit more time in it than you have as I'm sharing a lot of ideas in little space and they probably take a bit to digest depending on your expertises, but thanks for trying. I guess anything being exposed in that document is fair game, including the soundness of the ideas exposed (however limited their current exposure), their applicability, how to improve visual & textual communication are areas where I would more than welcome feedback.